Help! Tris Is In A Koma! is a Divergent/Tokyo Mew Mew/Maximum Ride/real world crossover
with intentionally bad writing written by KC the Zeddict.
One day, Tobias Eaton and Christina were walking down the halls of the Dauntless compound when suddenly...
Christina: OH MY GOD! TOBIAS! COME HERE NOW!
Lying on the floor was the strong
and outrageously hot body of Tris Prior.
Tobias: What in the name of Ellie Goulding is she doing on the floor?
Christina tries shaking her awake, but with no success.
Christina: I DON'T KNOW! BUT SHE WON'T WAKE UP!!!
[not yet finished; will continue later]